Monday, January 17, 2011

Story in the ventory[Second Draft]

There was a story that happened in a mysterious age. There were two protagonists in this story. One was James who was an elder from Africa and another was Wade who was an Indian that like bring a drum. They were very good friends when they were young.
One day they got a information that there was a treasure in a small island in the Mississippi river. They decided to get the treasure and to sell it, then they could changed their life. They used one week to make a small canoe, then they started the amazing travel 'Find the treasure'.
After 3 days of journey, they reached the small island and they found a beautiful white house. They tried to go into the house but its door was locked. The door seems need a stamp to open it. They went to find the important key around the island. After a half day searching, they found a people who carried a sword under a tree. Wade asked him did he know where the stamp is. The guy told them he was the stamp's master. If they wanted to get it, there were only two ways. One was try to beat him, the second was use three chestnuts to exchange it. James thought himself was strong enough to beat the guy, so he used his weapon yellow wood ruler to fight. Unexpected, this guy was too hard to beat and James lost the contest. After the contest, the guy found the old yellow wood ruler was more precious than the three Carl chestnuts, so he said if James can gave him the ruler, he will give them the important stamp. James agreed that and got the stamp. Beacuse of the stamp, they went into the house and found there was a bald statue which had a sentence “you must call the master’s name to go to the mysterious room” on it. Wade said he remembered that there was a name on the stamp. Then Wade said “Luo Lun” and the door opened.
They went into the small room, but they found there was nothing in it. James discovered some strange under a colorful carpet. He went to move the carpet and saw a stairs that can let them downstairs. It was really a very dark basement, Wade use his small green jar to do something. At that time, James was very confused to Wade’s act, but just a second later Wade shows James an amazing show. He used Internal Strength to light gas in the jar and the jar was looks like a flashlight. Because of the amazing flashlight they found a small Indian dish, it was also some words under the dish that was “The treasure was not in the house, the master bring the treasure every day”. At that time, James and Wade understood the treasure must be kept by the guy they saw in the island and they went to found the guy again.
They came back to find the guy and asked the things about the treasure. The guy told them, he was the master of the house, all the challenges they encountered were gave by him. He also said they had finished all the challenge and they can get the treasure now. Then the guy gave them the treasure whichwas a yellow wallet. James and Wade saw there was nothing in the wallet they suspected the guy cheated them. The guy promised them the wallet must be the treasure but they need to untie the secret of the wallet.
They started their second amazing travel 'untie the secret of wallet'...

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